Autumn Chill
Version 1
Autumn leaves float -
Empty boats adrift on a still loch -
Scavenger birds.
Version 2
Autumnal leaves float
Empty boats upon the Loch
Just scavenger birds
Version 3
Abandoned boats
Autumn leaves
Drift on the loch
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I love Autumn, but here I write about a darker feeling. Instead of the beauty and bright colours, the death and chill of a potentially sad season. I experimented with a short form of poetry. These are three versions from my proverbial scrap book.
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