Poetic Rewrite

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Original:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference."
~ Robert Frost ~

Rewrite:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I would have taken the broad way to destruction if it weren't for that blinding light. Instead I was compelled to follow the straight and narrow and He has made all the difference. 
~ DTH ~

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Inspired by the conversion of St Paul and Jesus' teaching of The Way. Written for a poetry prompt from Poetry Cove that asked us to rewrite a famous poetic quote.

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Follower of Jesus, non-conformist, preacher, poet, blogger, graduate of Highland Theological College, Husband, Father, Son, Brother, Friend, Learning Assistant (ASN) Outdoors. Late diagnosed Autistic.

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